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The world span faster for a while,
Whirled round in pallid circles
Of white damask.
Soothed out the rough edges of obscurity
Into circular adventure.

Child-like adventure.
Carefree and all-consuming.
The peeling back of masking leaves
Across the stretching woodland path:

There was a green sheen across sight,
Nothing rose-coloured or scarily clichéd;
A natural sense shrouded in  questions,
Acceptance and endless contemplation.

The disarray of thoughts
Is a monolith to grapple with;
Neverending, irrational and fearful.

But the cloth fitted so tightly, so snugly
To a planed and soft skin,
That each twitch and tense of a muscle
Was a sign of definition
Against the ethereal naiveté

Lay the one true fear
Of what was in store.
©2008-2009 ~petit-chou-fleur
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Author's Comments

Not too proud of the ending, but I quite like the imagery of this one. Think I wrote this about December, thought I may as well post it, seeing as I never write anymore.

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:icondescanted:
You don't write anymore? Nooooo! Write, dammit!

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Mary had a lamb,
His eyes black as coals.
If we play very quiet, my lamb,
Mary never has to know.



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:iconpetit-chou-fleur:
Lol! I'll do my best!!

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Tranquility interrupted by a jealous mind, life overcome by the grief of the ending, celebratory drinks for a lost occasion, a mind full of black, the tainted, dirty white.
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Not too proud? This poem ruled all. I love your descriptions -- they're so vivid, like I can really imagine everything word for word. And I held on to your poem til the last word. It was great! I must learn how to be as descriptive as you loll. Nice work :) Hope to see more. Your work is always a good read.

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That's not what she said.
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The disarray of thoughts
Is a monolith to grapple with;

and

That each twitch and tense of a muscle
Was a sign of definition
Against the ethereal naiveté

are definitely the most beautiful parts of this poem.
I think it's "Spun" not "Span" btw. Hope to see you active again soon.

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Perish all thought.

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