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The gentle caress of skeletal forms,
Breezing soundlessly past,
the gnawed flesh of nature's mortality.

Witnessing sudden deviation,
Leaving it fluttering silently to the ground,
Newly exposed to impending dangers
Of fallen grace.

The vulnerable bones the remnants
Of once proudly shouldered plumage.
A haunting reminder
Of hierarchical positions

Position but not power,
A celestial community,
United individuals
Stand together to rule them all.

Amongst god-like figures
But now demoted
To cluttered collections
Of the rejected, littering the surroundings
The shamed group
doomed to rot in pity and disgust.

Descending
Dropping
Falling

A cursed freedom
An ending becomes the beggining
Of cyclic continuation...
©2005-2009 ~petit-chou-fleur
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Another sudden idea, I've changed this a lot from the first draft, I'm not too sure whether i like this too much, but I haven't posted poetry in a while so here it is... I wonder if you can guess what I'm trying to describe :)
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WOW................just..............WOW ! your way better at poetry than me! and now, your inspiring me!! your just.....WOW!

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Harry truly is Dumbledores boy through and through

Dumbledore will never be gone, not as long as those who remain, are loyal to him!
Oh thank you so so much :hug: I'm so glad I inspired you! *Goes to look at your gallery* :)

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love how the lines shorten in the last2 verses,makes a real imapct

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-polly:you say i'm weird as if it's a bad thing...
i think of a dying leaf in the midst of winter, nice imagery

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Big words...... :D That's freakin' awesome! :clap: :glomp: Woo!! :w00t:

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duuuuudefulness!!!!!!!!!!! :jawdrop: aw thats so awesome!

i love it! the nature/human contrastness, the layout of the thing :faint: :clap:

:+fav: Plus-favourite-no-jutsu! *chakraness*

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Its just a three letter word
I have only two emotions: Happy and dancing! :boogie:
Thanks that's what I was aiming for!

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Yay that's exactly what it is! Thanks :)

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Yay, thanks :blowkiss:

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