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The tame tides
Of the world
Rocked the steady onslaught
Of freedom...

Lost some stragglers
Along the way;
Caught between
Commitment and desire,

But we pulled through
In this chaos of panic,
Bitterness and
Self-destruction

Funny how we can
Be so complacent
About the things we
Deem important.

Ironic.

And it sometimes
Makes me wonder
How we manage
To go on...
©2007-2009 ~petit-chou-fleur
:iconpetit-chou-fleur:

Author's Comments

Just generally about how life pans out... you foten don't expect things to be how they are.

I'm not sure about the last paragraph but I can't think of a better replacement.

Started writing this on my phone on the way home from school once lol.

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:iconjustpolly:
i really like the sentiment of this, can relate to it a fair bit.
but i'm not sure about the enjabment

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you say i'm weird as if it's a bad thing...
:icongatriel:
You make a huge thing seem so compact and powerful and the same with something small. Good job

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Saanka
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very cool! i like it!
:icondescanted:
I can totally relate to randomly writing stuff on your phone, I do that all the time. Random lines will just hit me out of seemingly no where and that's the easiest place to put them, usually.

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Mary had a lamb,
His eyes black as coals.
If we play very quiet, my lamb,
Mary never has to know.



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:iconpetit-chou-fleur:
Thank you :) Yeah I'm crap at deciding about punctuation lol, any suggestions??

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Tranquility interrupted by a jealous mind, life overcome by the grief of the ending, celebratory drinks for a lost occasion, a mind full of black, the tainted, dirty white.
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:iconpetit-chou-fleur:
Thanks so much :)

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:iconpetit-chou-fleur:
Cheers!!

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:iconpetit-chou-fleur:
Yeah exactly!! I never have a pen and paper so it's definitely the easiest place!

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Tranquility interrupted by a jealous mind, life overcome by the grief of the ending, celebratory drinks for a lost occasion, a mind full of black, the tainted, dirty white.
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:iconjustpolly:
read it out loud, when you find yourself pausing-add that punctuation accordingly ;)

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you say i'm weird as if it's a bad thing...

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